Intro:This picture is a sence of a beach.
JS:Is scene not sence
d:on the bottom right hand corner there is a boy cycling
D:Glen, there is no (.) in your sentence and your (on) is not in capital letter.
I:He is having a healthy lifestyle.
e:I think he is bored.
e:I think he felt bored.
O:I think he is having a good time cycling and playing.
JS:He is cycling only not playing.
D:There is a man fishing.
D:on the top right hand corner there is a man fishing
I:He is waiting for a bait.
E:I think his wife ask him to fish
0:I tink his wife want him to fish for their dinner
thinkput wrong
sorry
D:Beside the man fishing, there is a boy in the sea swimming.
I:I think he is having a healthy lifestyle.
E:I think maybe the weather was cool so he went for a swim in the sea.
O:I think that he is trying to exercise more and be more healthy.
0:i think he enjoy swimming as it is a good exercise
Glen why you never take about the to child who is building a sand castle?
js:one by one
D:On the top left hand corner,there is a couple having a pinic.
Glen, do you want to go back to that picture that you skipped?
I:i think they are enjoying themself.
E:I think they are relaxing themselves
O:I think they are having a great time eating their food and they are chatting happily.
D:Two boys were barbecuwing their food.
js:You are writing (I) not (O)
D:on the bottom left hand corner there are two boys barbercuing
I:I think they are having a party.
barbequing
O:I think they should not throw the rubbish on the floor because they will pollute the earth.
JS:u should write (E)
o:I think they must throw the rubbish into the bin
E:I think they are celebrating thier friends birthday party.
D:There is a girl throwing a can in the litter bin.
I:I think she is a good girl because she has a good habit of throwing the rubbish in the rubbish bin.
js:Glen the word their is wrong is their not thier.
I:I think she have a good habit.
E:I think she is a good girl to help keep the beach litter free
O :I think her mother had teach her good habit.
d:on the middle there is a group people playing volleyball
I:I think the boy are enjoying themselves.
I:I think the children are having fun from their face expressions.
O:Ithik they cannot play near the sand castle as they might hit the sand castle.
e:i think they felt bored
Ending:I think most of them had enjoy and i wish i could bring my family to the beach once a month.
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Intro:This picture is a sence of a beach.
JS:Is scene not sence
d:on the bottom right hand corner there is a boy cycling
D:Glen, there is no (.) in your sentence and your (on) is not in capital letter.
I:He is having a healthy lifestyle.
e:I think he is bored.
e:I think he felt bored.
O:I think he is having a good time cycling and playing.
JS:He is cycling only not playing.
D:There is a man fishing.
D:on the top right hand corner there is a man fishing
I:He is waiting for a bait.
E:I think his wife ask him to fish
0:I tink his wife want him to fish for their dinner
think
put wrong
sorry
D:Beside the man fishing, there is a boy in the sea swimming.
I:I think he is having a healthy lifestyle.
E:I think maybe the weather was cool so he went for a swim in the sea.
O:I think that he is trying to exercise more and be more healthy.
0:i think he enjoy swimming as it is a good exercise
Glen why you never take about the to child who is building a sand castle?
js:one by one
D:On the top left hand corner,there is a couple having a pinic.
Glen, do you want to go back to that picture that you skipped?
I:i think they are enjoying themself.
E:I think they are relaxing themselves
O:I think they are having a great time eating their food and they are chatting happily.
D:Two boys were barbecuwing their food.
js:You are writing (I) not (O)
D:on the bottom left hand corner there are two boys barbercuing
I:I think they are having a party.
barbequing
O:I think they should not throw the rubbish on the floor because they will pollute the earth.
JS:u should write (E)
o:I think they must throw the rubbish into the bin
E:I think they are celebrating thier friends birthday party.
D:There is a girl throwing a can in the litter bin.
I:I think she is a good girl because she has a good habit of throwing the rubbish in the rubbish bin.
js:Glen the word their is wrong is their not thier.
I:I think she have a good habit.
E:I think she is a good girl to help keep the beach litter free
O :I think her mother had teach her good habit.
d:on the middle there is a group people playing volleyball
I:I think the boy are enjoying themselves.
I:I think the children are having fun from their face expressions.
O:Ithik they cannot play near the sand castle as they might hit the sand castle.
e:i think they felt bored
Ending:I think most of them had enjoy and i wish i could bring my family to the beach once a month.
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